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I've finally finished watching Nabari no Ou after ignoring pretty much half the series since April. And thanks to the anime, I'm now completely hooked on the manga I'm surprised how faithfully the anime followed the manga until chapter 40-something

I need moreeeeee. But whatever, I have a fic. Yeah, already.

Title: Four times Miharu failed (and the one time he succeeded)
Character(s)/Pair(s): Miharu/Yoite; Yukimi
Rating: G
Word count: 479 Damn, this is short
Notes: Manga-related. Abuse of commas and brackets.



01;
Miharu couldn’t explain it, but the few times he was left alone in the city by Yukimi, he would undoubtedly find himself walking towards the hospital. In that building of healing that reeks of sterilization, medicine and sickness, Miharu remembers the anxiety and fear. The inescapable thought of please be okay, please be alive, just for another day! and the relief that rushes over him when he realizes that he hasn’t lost that part of himself yet. (And he remembers the cold autumn wind and the shock that someone else’s heart goes ‘nyaa’ in the cold too because it’s always been his special quirk, but sharing it with that person didn’t feel too bad either.)

The large glass doors slide open and Miharu steps in, takes in the hospital’s smell and walks out again into the night. He’ll need to wear gloves soon.

02;
Once upon a time, a beautiful princess was born, and a grand ceremony was held in honour of her birth. Everyone was invited except for the witch. Angered that she was forgotten, the jealous witch cursed the princess to eternal slumber should she pierce herself with a needle.

Miharu’s never liked fairy tales because there would always be a happy ending; the princess would always be saved by the prince. But what if there wasn’t a prince, what if the prince never made it- was slain by that dragon? Miharu sighs and closes his English homework, wonders what would happen if the princess was never awakened from her slumber.

03;
“The stars are so bright tonight,” Yukimi observes. He tears his gaze away from the night sky to watch his assistant, who looked up from the camera he was holding. “Did you have a good time at the planetarium today?”

Miharu drops the camera and lets it hang loosely around his neck. “Yeah, took loads of pictures.” (Stars, a bullet train, dreams and he doesn’t know what to make of these fragments that were already trickling away as soon as he scooped them up) “Look, there’s Ursa Major and Ursa Minor.” He says while pointing at the sky and frowns when he realizes that although the constellations looked close together from Earth, in space they were millions of kilometers away.

04;
Miharu couldn’t explain why he was crying one sunny afternoon while munching on an apple. (“Completely organic!” The lady had said before giving it to Miharu)

05;
There was blood and snow and gloved hands clasped tightly in his own. The gentle weight against his shoulder, the slight rise and fall of his chest that’s proof that he’s still here. The whispered “Thank you, Miharu” that he could barely hear.

And then nothingness.

He wakes up to the soft nuzzling of a black cat licking up his tears. “Good morning, Yoite.” He greets, while petting the cat’s head but the tears don't stop.


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[info]lonelyblkviolet wrote:
Jul. 4th, 2009 11:47 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is beautiful. I like how you split it, it's like Miharu's gradually getting closer to Yoite, but at the same time, they're being drifted apart. And the very last paragraph is so bittersweet and touching and brilliant.

I loved it. Amazing job.
[info]ludicmelody wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 01:19 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I was actually really worried about this, it being my first fic for the series and characterization and all that. I'm glad you liked it.♥

The last paragraph along with part 3 was also my favourite. Bittersweet was exactly what I was aiming for, I'm happy it worked out~
[info]lonelyblkviolet wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 02:42 am (UTC)
Psst, I was just re-reading this, and I found a little mistake.

The tears don't stop.

<3
[info]ludicmelody wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 02:48 am (UTC)
Ah, thanks. That phrase has been bothering me for some time, but for some reason I couldn't really figure out what. Which is really sad. D:

fixed!
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 02:01 am (UTC)
so sad ;x; i love Yoite/Miharu and i can´t wait more, there´s only 9 chapters without yoite and i´m almost insane D:
[info]ludicmelody wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 02:08 am (UTC)
I hope it wasn't too sad. D:

Hahaha, I know right? but I have this strange feeling he's not going to be in it for a while.
[info]pockethotel wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 02:14 pm (UTC)
waaaah this is lovely! ;__;
[info]ludicmelody wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 04:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks~♥
[info]sumire_yuki wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
oh...it's so sad TT__TT
[info]ludicmelody wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC)
DD: I didn't mean to make it that sad

But yeah. Their relationship to me was tragic right from the beginning.♥
[info]sumire_yuki wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 09:58 pm (UTC)
sometime I think that I'm the only one who wants happy end~~~~~~
[info]ludicmelody wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 10:11 pm (UTC)
Well no. I would love it if Miharu was able to stay with Yoite forever. But given the circumstances...

It's like they're fighting against time/fate.
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